Friday, May 25, 2007

Three In One Comments

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My son is me in double,
i love him as I love his son.
can I tolerate his behavior?
have I not done good enough,
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Alison Cassidy 08 June 2007

An awesome and ever persent feeling of responsibility rings through this personal poem of recognition and kin. Sometimes it's difficult to trust in life to take care of those we love, and yet, we can't live another's life for them, however much we love them. Your line 'another me in my grandson's birth' is beautiful. love, Allie xxxx

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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