Three Haikus Comments

Bri, the syllabic constraint is not chiseled in stone. The Japanese haikus use concrete imagery, nature and animals, and allude to the seasons. Try reading Basho. He's one of the best Japanese artists, and William Packard's book "The Art of Poetry Writing."

i like this but 'The first line is 5 syllables. The second line is 7 syllables. The third line is 5 syllables like the first.' is what Google tells me. bri ;)

Thank you Varsha. Have you read the 19th century Japanese poet Basho? He was a haiku master.

Thank you Maytag. The Japanese poet Basho inspired these haikus.

Thank you Bernard.

A well executed poem.... Truly excellent and brilliant.....5 stars *****

Silence...how soothing To the anxious spirit. The rabbit sleeps in his burrow/// that's beautiful

Yes silence is good at time. It revives souls and increase our own understanding.... beautiful