In this college town
three girls of Spring are fresh bread
brown before the noon of May.
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Bravo! A well crafted and powerful write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! I like it very much! Very impressive and thought provoking one! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always!
Very fresh illustration of a moral using believable, freshly described characters. A moment brought to life. Fresh metaphors. Effortless poem from a (probably) practiced hand.