Tuesday, December 31, 2013
Three Dream Haikus Comments
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1. That day the Alps grew slowly beautiful.
Touching hands, we learnt to ski.
2. I did not race the river as I walked
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Dinesan Madathil
31 December 2013
Powerful lines rich with thoughts enticing... A good beginning Mr Madhavan
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7/28/2025 1:56:05 PM # 1.0.0
the images are beautiful as the expressive words are either carefully or naturally selected for the expression, but there are some differences here that collide with traditional haiku scheme, the base you laid for conveying the feel is neat and good!