Three Days Of Rain Comments
Drenched assumptions were all we had.
It was alright, she said,
for umbrellas to be panaceas,
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A shelter from the down pour of a great rainfall. The roofs and window panes being pelted up and down from the force of the rain. Finding a dry place in the company of a beautiful woman adds to the effect. Very good!
a very good write someday joy may die like different plants. too much over watering is not good.
Quite impressive Sir, balance, well structured and specially the last stanza.....Superbly crafted.
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7/17/2025 5:05:26 PM # 1.0.0
This makes me think of the Don Hall quote about self-editing, cutting back. Example: My own clouds form: Roofs are/ slanted opinions/ the right amount of strength. it's gray and hopefully peaceful