Saturday, August 23, 2014

Three Coins For Her Love Comments

Rating: 4.2

Close your eyes and stretch your palm
I tell her.

She doubts my intention.
...
Read full text

Pradip Chattopadhyay
COMMENTS
Valsa George 25 August 2014

Traces of a binding relationship at once serious and mischievous with enough light moments to ease the strain of everyday life!

0 0 Reply
Bill Cantrell 23 August 2014

The last line is so fitting for many men, good poem my friend

0 0 Reply
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 August 2014

Very insightful also funny that raises mischief and suspicion.........well done Sir

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success