Thursday, June 24, 2010

Three Birds Comments

Rating: 4.8

Three birds perched
One flew away
Two remained perching
Another flew away
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Kolawole Ajao
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Jim Troy 14 August 2011

Following the master's plan and to me it is lonely and haunting in a vision I miss the birds..........................Nice Poetry My Friend Jim Troy

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 16 July 2010

Very deep poetry …childhood …young age…old age…next finality…wonderful… congrats … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Zaynab Elzain 07 July 2010

cool poem.. i wish i was one of this birds

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Hans Vr 30 June 2010

I like it also. Looks like a reality in life. Sometimes all go flying and we are left behind. Luckily our Creator is always by our side. Indeed a very nice, cute short poem.

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So cute! Migration...to return again. Lovely little poem; D

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Kolawole Ajao

Kolawole Ajao

Akure, Ondo State Nigeria
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