Three Bird Haikus Comments
The falcon stoops straight
down and in a death grip hooks
an unwary seagull.
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An amazing combination of three bird haikus.- a falcon, a crow and a mocking bird. A bird watcher's interesting poem.
Very impressing poems, I read birds but see no haiku, but still I enjoyed your marvelous words, dear poet.
A haiku is harder to construct in the 5/7/5 syllable Japanese way. It's not chiseled in stone but it's ok to come close to that. It should use concrete imagery, nature, and allude to a season, ideally. I disagree with you. Have you read the great Basho?
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7/27/2025 9:39:07 PM # 1.0.0
Thank you Geeta. I appreciate your comments.