Threads Of Time Comments

Beautiful composition from yourself which you have sewn together with words as your needles resulting in a tapestry of life ending with 'Threads of time brewing in this simple rhyme.' lovely...regards

Life catching me and giving me the gift of a mentor. Experience exposes to us the contour of life. A thoughtful poem and a song of experience. Brilliant write.

So many corrupt and mischievous lies, Stole my younger years. What a poem!

Again, another wonderful poem. Descriptive writing at it's best. They say there's no substitute for experience, But experience comes with a heavy price sometimes. I'm glad you found the true you in the end.

threads of time weave a beautiful tapestry for life. I love the thought. a good read

Beautifully composed. Threads of time brewing in this simple rhyme. So true! Uplifting a wealth of undernourished emotions, Building a complicated maze, To find my way out was difficult, As I was in a constant daze, Magnificent!

Good read.............time laps and we learn new lessons of life.........

A nice piece of work this is, Hazel!

You have excellently woven this web of threads of time... Wonderful compilation of intense thoughts and assumptions realistic. Madam, I was out of the PH when my site got crashed. Now I am back resubmitting my poems and adding the new. Let us share the old intimacy as PH friends. Dinesh

Dear, the world is give and take Gives a little from there Takes a little from here Provides us all delicious cake Knowing not the Nature's course Sometimes we lose Sometimes we gain Why are we full of remorse! ! ! ! !

'Then I became the cook and baked my own creation, ' Great. I like this line and there are great choices of words in other lines too. I like this poem.

A few sweet moments drop from sunny skies, So many corrupt and mischievous lies, Stole my younger years./a better me, was the true revelation, Threads of time brewing in this simple rhyme. /Its like wreathing yew berry for inner whisper lovely one a great write Hazel

threads of time get tangled togethr weaving a tapestry of life. great write.

wow heart touching poem a great one sry for late comment i have to pull up my muscles to understand your poetry so sry hazel

Smoothly flowing lines with beautiful opening and a true self-revelation you find in the end.

Threads of time brewing in this simple rhyme. not simple beautifully baked. u have brewed threads of time

so beautiful, somewhat sad but well written, a true expression of the heart.

nicely and beautifully written poem

What a gorgeous flow of metaphors, knitted with threads of truth, wisely taught, colored with a drop of the poet's heart, what else could a reader ask? Lovely perfection, touched!

Caring for everyone else is fantastic but putting everyone's needs before your own will burn you. People take advantage of the charitable and born empathetic. It's like pulling our bank account statements and finding out the one you told to fill up the tank emptied your whole account. Much love for the write.