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I am deeply touched by this poem of brotherhood and friendship. Reading this poem, I am inspired to expand my 'circle of love'. Thank you Valsa, I am convinced that poems can be very motivating to make us better human beings. Your poem reached out to me to make my day today. 'So see each one as protective armor A co traveller, a shoulder to lean on And never an adversary To be defeated or demolished! ' - Indeed so, let's try!

An Inspiring write with great message. Fill the life with peace and love. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Another excellent poem with an outstanding message. Making peace with ourselves makes all the difference.

Hi, Valsa! Amen to your message—a worthy one, and one like what I reach for. I like “the placental river of a mother”—the image and the liquid sound of it. You’ve had recent cause to think on your mortality—which is good for reflection and ordering priorities. Hoping this finds you well. May love fill and preserve us. -Glen

This is an outstanding poem with a wonderful message. ‘Replace your anger by forgiveness Drown your greed in founts of compassion. Great poem.10+++

Your wisdom transcends all boundaries, your poem a pleasure to read. Thank you Valsa.

''So see each one as protective armor A co traveller, a shoulder to lean on And never an adversary To be defeated or demolished! '' - united we stand; divided we fall. Profound and wise, your words to humanity. A great poem, poetically written.

In the valley of melancholy, there is a breeze with the scent of a savior, your poetry carries you through eternity my friend, wonderful poetry! ! !

‘Replace your anger by forgiveness / Drown your greed in founts of compassion / Discard the lethal weapons of jealousy and animosity / Draw everyone into the magic circle of your love'- - - - -the loveliest words ever spoken by man [okay-woman! ] and we would do well to inscribe these words in our heart, dearest Valsa, wise poet! 10++++

Love and friendship and brotherhood for all the creatures leads one to the love of God and love of God brings a peaceful death.

Perfect! From the first line to the last!

This poem touches the heart and stirs the mind to dream of a lovely lovable world of all as one family...there should be no discrimination, no hatred, no war and no negativity at all... if such a dream comes true how wonderful it would be then! ! ! kudos Valsa

We are one species; all brethren. If we treated everyone the way we treat our loved ones (as we should): what a wonderful world this would be.

An adorable piece of poetry! This beautiful piece of work carries a great message! Liked the underlying philosophy! Thanks dear madam for sharing...10

'Replace your anger by forgiveness Drown your greed in founts of compassion Discard the lethal weapons of jealousy and animosity Draw everyone into the magic circle of your love'.........touching expression with nice theme. There is a saying..'A heart can't be won by the point of a sword.' We can't solve anger or problems by force but we can solve these by love easily. This is a beautiful poem on love and friendship having an intensive inscription.10

Draw everyone into the magic circle of your love..liked this line very much, a touching poem