Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Thoughts Of You Comments

Rating: 4.5

If you ever dared to ask me
If I always thought of you.
I would surely be embarrassed,
To reply, 'Tis not so true'.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
Cristy Upshaw 17 April 2009

Wonderful display of emotions. I just adore your works and how well they come together and flow so nicely, no matter the subject. Touching and exquisite.

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Matt Burgett 19 February 2009

very good.....the emotion in this is wonderfull i don't know what else to say!

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 28 December 2008

Great words used which diplay the mixed feeling when we are in love! Ihad enjoy reading it!

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Catrina Heart 28 November 2008

A vivid kind of poem that describes men on their feelings about love...Great quatrain verses with fine rhymes and rhythm...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 September 2008

Full of love! ecstatic words! ryhm/rythm/verses emitting lovely feelings!

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Con Nie 20 August 2008

So nice to be that much in love. Love can be treasured forever and I know true love is always here to stay and never goes away. Beautiful poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Dee Daffodil 15 August 2008

Lovely...painfully sad...but lovely. Why is it that those lost loves of our lives...are often the greatest loves? ? Hugs, Dee

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Adele Le Keur 07 July 2008

you immortalised the echoes of my heart..i put my pen down in the presence of such greatness..

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Sean O'Gorman 27 June 2008

wow, truly inspiring. i can really relate to this poem. beautiful.

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Anjali Sinha 18 June 2008

hey beautiful words. are u in love with this person around whom u have penned all these words--or is it just a fantasy. let me know nah. great. keep up yur beautiful writing

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Corey Culler 27 April 2008

Very good. ^_^, I loved it

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Kevin Deckert 07 April 2008

You expressed this very nice, one can read this fluent and enjoy it, great work!

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Deaths Darling 05 April 2008

Wow.. that's pretty much all I can say about this one.

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delilah contrapunctal 28 March 2008

Hi GW Well said...sweetly and honestly...fine work, it is.....thankyou. Best, D.

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Alison Cassidy 27 March 2008

Like the structure of this poem and the sentiments, both honest and tender-hearted. You have a good feel for the phrasing of poetry - the final stanza rounds off your poem very well indeed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Linda Ori 27 March 2008

Oh, I do like this one! It's so nice to hear a man say what's in his heart, because so many consider it a sign of weakness to do so. Whether or not this is a personal confession, it certainly is heartfelt and also quite sad. Beautifully written. Linda :)

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Andrew Blakemore 27 March 2008

Beautifully written with a great climax. Very touching indeed. Andrew

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Tsira Goge 26 March 2008

It is Charming and ennobled poetry... Tsira

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 March 2008

as u verse it simply burns brilliant, wonderful poetry when flown by the love mystical in time and space, i do admire the ingenuity when you have played, great write,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Howard Johnson 21 March 2008

A heart twisting piece of beauty, with words, Excellent rhythm and flow, Each stanza is quality crafted, a most excellent work, GW.

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