Thoughts Of Thoughts Comments

Two corrections: loneliness and supposed to.

great poem, i feel like this a lot! ! ! keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

I love this because there's no exact meaning to it. It's a thought. 'Not so sure lost in a daze of confusion' Those lines said it all.

That's a poem that I didn't understand... What does it mean is very complicated, because you seemed be so, so away of earth when you made it. It doesn't have any rhyme, something very questiinable in a poem. The words you used are very simple, and seemed like you haven't any connection with world. It doesn't have a figured mean. That's very strange... Of all the poems I read, this one gets the prize of worse.2.5 for it.

sometimes we find ourselfs wondering around not sure what to do... or how to make things right. good job. Becca

Sometimes life seems to be doodling around.....Keep on trying to set things right!