Thoughts Of Suicide! ! ! Comments

I do not like this poem its sad.

This brings back a lot of sad memories for me... its really good though. i love the way you worded this poem. =)

Hey! Dear nice but it sacred me plz dear there always ups and down in life so face it as a challenge dear...

I liked the details. It was a real experience for the reader because of them. A very nice piece indeed. I was curious to see how you proceeded with yours. I have read many of these. Yours is one of the best. You might want to be a screenwriter. Or a novelist. Good luck. GW62

sad, beautiful, and absolutly Amazing work. good job. u brought me almost to tears.

1. Please don't commit suicide, we don't want a loss of a great writer. 2. Speaking of great, this was really really really great. You know how to make the reader keep a visual in their mind as they're reading it. Amazing Job! : ] 10!

I loved it. It keeps you intwined in the story and it makes sure that it keeps your interest until you read every word. It scares you to think about one of your friends making something like this happen, but it's possible to defeat it, even if it's hard and painful, so plz don't. But this waz a really great piece. I'm impressed Scale 1-10....14 Good job Bud

nice story so many ups and downs great piece makes people think... Sad too Krista

i loved the poem but plz dont make it come true and plz live its true think about it u can go through with it and die and hurt all the ones u love and love u including me or just deal with life slowly and painfully just like me....

suicide the cowards way out of problems a good story a 10!

It will not solve your problem.You got to face it, by hook or by crook.Good job bro.

'A Fool’s plan to escape the real life' DEEP THOUGHT, CAPTIVATING, THANKS FOR SHARING