When you held me you said "forever"
Now that you're gone I know you meant "never"
Tears of blood shed from my broken heart
I never thought we would be apart
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth in good scheme from the heart. A very passionate write with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Anjali.
Nice play on words and rhyme. I love this poem 4 it painted a pucture of a broken geart rightly. Ty