Tuesday, July 23, 2019

Thoughts Of My Broken Heart Comments

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When you held me you said "forever"
Now that you're gone I know you meant "never"
Tears of blood shed from my broken heart
I never thought we would be apart
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Anjali Bhola
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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

Nice play on words and rhyme. I love this poem 4 it painted a pucture of a broken geart rightly. Ty

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Chinedu Dike 25 July 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth in good scheme from the heart. A very passionate write with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Anjali.

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Anjali Bhola 25 July 2019

Wow, thank you

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