Saturday, December 6, 2008

Thoughts Of An Old Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stand still
while movement is all round me.
I stand still at the margin of life
with so little time
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Fred Babbin
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Barbara Sallee 18 June 2009

Fred, Another great write, certainly a thinker

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Sonny Rainshine 06 December 2008

Very Whitmanesque and thoughtful. I like the image of standing still while everything around us is in constant movement. It is in such moments, I think, that some of the best poetry gets written.

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