‘Keep in touch' - he said, before parting.
He didn't hold her hand, didn't embrace,
Just gave an innocent smile,
And a warm look in his sparkling eyes.
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@Aniruddha Pathak, Thanks for reading and appreciating this poem. Much inspired by your comment.
Sparkling eyes of peace and love! Able to be in touch. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes it is touch. A touch of words heard, what you see in someone's eyes touches, A flavour, fragrance, or taste touches, All senses. A lovely poem.
if you don't object, i am placing this into my February 2019 showcase, upcoming. i am including your copyright line also. Thanks. (: bri
I'm glad that you've chosen my poem for your 'showcase'. Thanks a lot!
my reaction after finishing the poem: oh, wow! and a little shiver i think. kind of sensual! ! ! of course she was speaking of me! it wasn't Valsa, .......WAS it? to MyPoemList. bri (:
Ha ha, you always have a way to make people laugh! I hope, Valsa will take the comment kindly, as usual. Thanks for taking the poem to your 'MyPoemList'.
POETS AND poetesses don't sing 4 me nor do they read me NEITHER DO SIR YOU I wonder why I am not a raw eater under the blue sky just say WHY TELL ME MY FANS just WHY
Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment. I've just read your poem 'Selfless Love for Humanity' and left a comment there.
Sweet words touch mind and these make us melt from inside in tenderness. Words deeply touch life is true. A nice poem is beautifully penned and this is excellent one.
'these make us melt from inside in tenderness' - yes, that's true and that's what is stated in the poem to have happened. Thank you for your comment, dear poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
PURE LOVE AT LOVING CONVERSATION! - lovely romantic expression beautiful poem
@Edward Kofi Louis, Yes, thanks once again for the second comment.