Confusion, loneliness, emptiness
Won't seem to go away
Just spinning, twirling
A sea of troubles
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~reaches out her hand~ Someone has been touched by your words, you are not alone...tis the pain that infuses your writings that can be felt by many. rejoice in a talent that is envied by most, revered by some, and brings light to dark things.... If you have not read my evey vendetta, please do...and see...there are people who really do care what you are going through...
wow its really heart touching and sad one: ( do read my poems too :)
very sad words, i often feel like this as well, it sucks! keep your chin up...very nicely written!
I really enjoyed this poem! The ending lines were fantastic! Keep it up!
very deep and heartfelt..i wish you never go through such pain mam.....a brilliant poem though thank you for sharing love payal