Thoughts Of A Broken Heart Comments
Legend has it that if you can't sleep
You're awake in someone else's dreams
So I hope that as you hold her in the womb of your arms
As she lies , dreamily, in a place that once used to be mine
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Thank you very much for your kind words and warm welcome to PoemHunter.I am touched that you like my poem.Really. Yes, this is my first poem as I am new here but I will be sharing more as the days go by. Chinedu I have read the poem and I love it.The theme, the words, the manner, ...everything; but I have also read. Children of Cruel Fate and I like it better.You've captured the plight of those children in such a graphic way.
I like the flow of the words and the words used to express it.
An insightful depiction of bliss of love, romance, loss of fascination, and heartbreak; well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - a voyage of pure bliss. It's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not carefully nurtured by both couples at all times to maintain its bliss. Thanks for sharing Clemence. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.
Wow! A poem full of passion. Very well done. This seems to be the first poem that you have posted to this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
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7/26/2025 11:07:20 PM # 1.0.0
Very beautiful! Please keep on writing x