Thoughts Maybe Comments

I can see that you think a lot and spend a lot of time in your thoughts. I get the impression from your poem that this sometimes worries you. You are not sure whether fate controls us or if there is such a thing as fate atall! Your words mean this to me and I connect with them in this way! ; -)

Good poem men, most of the times when we face some challenges in life we tend to doubt our abilities yet there is always a reason to trust in oneself for no one can believe in you better than your own self. Keep it up but i believe you can do better! ! ! lol

nice meaning and so interesting. i like the way that you write this poem. nice work.