Saturday, May 3, 2008

Thoughts Like Ribbons Strewn On The Ground Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thoughts like ribbons strewn on the ground
Trailing like wraiths but leaving no sound
If thoughts are things then they should not
Then they should not disappear
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Rani Turton
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Sandra Fowler 05 May 2008

Excellent use of simile. Praise for your beautiful thoughts. Love, Sandra

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 May 2008

Thoughts like dreams can fly away Fa, far into the starry night. Far across a green meadow.................lovely imagery of thoght of unique genre, i like most, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara 05 May 2008

An absolute beautiful creative write. Superbly expressed deep thoughts, an exquisite enjoyable piece.

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There are some mesmorising similes in here. t x

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James B. Earley 04 May 2008

The initial step of any pursuit! An excellent composition.

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Broken Peaces 04 May 2008

And the purest thoughts flow from your pen, thoughtful write 10 Chris x

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