Monday, January 18, 2016

Thoughts As She Starts To Fade. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think I was wrong.
I think I believed I was something I wasn't.
I believed maybe it could be true, maybe I am someone special.
A diamond in the rough, what have you,
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Leah Ayliffe
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Mike Smith 05 June 2016

In moments of great joy it is easy to think they might just last forever. Time has its ways though, and change is the only constant. There is a simplicity as well as a depth to this poem, a perfect balance and a very good write indeed

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Francie Lynch 19 January 2016

Fine write, Leah. Love the title and it's revelation.

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Mj Lemon 18 January 2016

And all relationships have their life cycles. This is a very poignant piece.

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Paul Davies 18 January 2016

There she was, she was just the same. Ulay, Ulay, oh.

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Leah Ayliffe

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