The darkness of the imminent night
Will soon arrive, by spatial law;
The stars not yet their radiant light
Shine forth and compass us in awe.
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This is another very good poem David, I enjoyed reading it, excuse the points I make, but I think you mean. 'encompass' in stead of 'compass' and 'bereft' in stead of 'reft'. If I am wrong then I apologise profusely. Sincerely Ernestine Northover
Good use of 'classical' form and Gothic semiotics give this a very Shelley-ish feel. I loved it.