Thoughts And Me Comments

The counting is an anchor...as we give in to it, we focus and our vision becomes clearer...A terrific poem, Ali.

A thought provoking poem......................................................

I like the counting- adds a distinctive touch to the piece. Well-penned!

Very profound piece of work. Written with flair n poetic intuition. Filled with wisdom. Full marks.

a different and quite original write up! ! ! ! ! !

Five steps to live a life. The last step says all.

these lines are pretty interesting: I become bore, so long being 'me' If I were a flower, a star... or a tree! ! ..............but try bored, not bore this is my favorite line of the poem: We are the waves, till shore we survive......thanks for sharing. it seems it has been a few years since you last submitted a poem. bri :)

like waves certainly we are........yet our mental makeup is the truth of every thing.....surrendering him will ease.......I like the last lines of this poem.....and the flow and thought are superb.......

Your think tank has flowed with the waves... very nice indeed ++++10 for me regards

Last two lines are superb....excellent piece of work

Sweet explanation to your thoughts....great title too. Well written....Merna

swim in the ocean of love Ali...sing to us more....John

Your thoughts are vibrant and profound.an assortment of a different emotive ideas. Very beautifully scripted! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Good luck!

pretty nice thought provoking composition writen with numbers for enumeration...10

one... two...three...four...five...the 'wave' dies out here in the lap of the 'shore'...beautiful insightful stanzas Ali...the last one is really good...a truth very beautifully told there...10

I wish it didn't end on 5 only, make it ten please: -)

ali u have a different touch in your poems that i admires alot well done frend ++++++++++++++++++++++++10 and A+++++++++++ POEM

loved the poem a lot especially the ending where u said 'We are the waves, till shore we survive...You are the OCEAN' thanks a lot for sharing

GOOD poem, fantastic......keep writing Merna

A thought can be even more vast and approach still more numbers.............But it is very elagantly written showing the limitlessness of thoughts..........and the title shows that you have ingrained your brain with a diversity of thoughts.........10/10 Best Regards Sameer