Friday, July 10, 2009

Thoughts And Feelings... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Different turns
No way of knowing
Which way I'm going
Pain that comes and goes
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Ashley Davis
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Mario Gauci 11 July 2020

I can well relate to that. Thanks Ashley

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James Harding 19 July 2012

U should write a book. lol I only like poems that rhyme but ill usually read a few lines of poems that are like this to give it a chance and move on but the way u write keeps the readers attention

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Lynn Glover 30 July 2010

Your have many things running through your head and I hope that someday you get all the answers to these questions. You are a good writer and I hope to see many more of poems here on PH. A very good write. Lynn

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Amna Rukhsar 01 April 2010

wow.... its really touching...love it =)

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Mackenzie Keane 25 February 2010

wow... I've felt this before, but what does that matter? lol just felt like sharing: D

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Achim Wollscheid 19 February 2010

I experience similar things as well but it is good to vent through poetry. This is very niice and relatable.

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We are living between to be or not to be. Good write.10.

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Ashley Davis

Ashley Davis

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