Wednesday, January 5, 2022

Thoughts And Desires. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why should I bargain with death for the virtues of life
When death is ultimate and life is temporary.

The rubber band of life cannot be stretched beyond a certain point.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Ricky Mangathen 07 January 2022

Truly wonderful poem.

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Michael Jack 06 January 2022

Brilliant poem 👏 i liked the flow of this poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 06 January 2022

Well composed poem with philosophical thought. Top scores.

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Susan Williams 06 January 2022

I feel like I just walked into the hearth room of a wise and gentle man. These lines are to be taken in slowly and solemnly as words of wisdom should be. I am favoriting this so I shall return to it often and ponder on its truths. More than a 5 star poem--this is at least a thousand star poem.

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Shreya Hacks 06 January 2022

Very well said MAN 'It is not worth waiting for anything When thoughts and desires go together.'

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 January 2022

Another wonderfully beautiful poem

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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