Thoughts Abound Comments

Thoughts are free flowing spontaneous now it is a miracle so I will bow in the praise of god and the holy spirit to give me the power to accomplish it. these are the great lines of your poem. i love it. go and writing. dont compare yourself with others who write. dont be diffident. you are unique. tony

Really intersting thoughts Amit.. And your choice of couplets to express them is good too... Thank you for sharing..

Very well expressed.Love it.

I never really thought that I can write verse my thoughts were wayward and so adverse But still I happened to write down one it may be short but still it was fun [..] / let me also hear from you how you felt when you were new / [..] nicely put, Amit. This is the feeling everyone had, here.. WELCOME at P.H.! Cheers

very good written well rhymed like it