Saturday, March 22, 2008

Thoughts.. Comments

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There I was, only I
standing on a seashore..
Tears welled up in my eyes
and started to roll down...
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Rituparna Choudhury
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Marieta Maglas 03 August 2009

a wonderful poem about thoughts... lyrics are free, words develop a theme, the poem is well structured

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Sumita Datta 03 August 2008

Very beautifully expressed....Well written Rituparna... :)

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Aisha Love 13 April 2008

a very beautiful poem

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Saathi 4u 11 April 2008

i like c.c-shore and c-personality. u hv excellent ideas to explore at sea shore one thing is very real. by reading ur poem my pen starts creating a poem in response. yes. the BEAUTY IS CREATOR. if beauty doesn't create any thing. its NOT A BEAUTY lovly thoughts u hv. keep writing...keep aware us with ur Fresssssh and Taazaa thoughts.the oringin excellence.u can now c my the new poem in respons to ur poem...jst now iam writing spontaneous. your's Saathi

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