Tuesday, January 16, 2018

Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.8

The intrusive thoughts are like cyst
which may grow inside you
Causing pain and discomfort
When shackled for long in your body
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Rini Shibu
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White Tiger 09 February 2018

Yes, peace of mind is peace of body and soul.

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Thanks Charlie.! !

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Rebecca Navarre 22 January 2018

Very Beautiful, Truthful And Calming Thoughts! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 23 January 2018

Thanks Rebecca for visiting this poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

Get rid of this mess or just/Ignore if it is harmless lump of thoughts..A precious write! Thanks for sharing Rini

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Rini Shibu 19 January 2018

Thanks Dillip for your comment Rini

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 January 2018

A very positive write beautifully penned.

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Rini Shibu 17 January 2018

Thanks Rose for your kind

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Kishore Kumar Das 16 January 2018

Thoughts......of pleasure and pain..........can be effectively translated into words....the magic medicine embedded in your lovely lines.......thanks for sharing......

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Rini Shibu 16 January 2018

Thanks Kishore for reading and commenting

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Nudershada Cabanes 16 January 2018

A wonderfully crafted poem Rini. Intrusive thoughts that annoys and disturbs our peace must be ignored and not given space to linger in our mind. A wise counsel. Nuder

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Rini Shibu 16 January 2018

Thanks Nuder for your feedback

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