Friday, December 4, 2015

Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.5

Thoughts...like the errant schoolchild
slither away from the channelled course
on to vistas new and varied
either divine or ignoble
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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 December 2015

A thought provoking and meaningful verse. Uniqueness of human being lies in his ability to think. Hence, it is certain that our thoughts, good or bad, direct and influence our actions. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.9 points.

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 08 December 2015

thanks for appreciating my poem

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hubli karnataka, india
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