Thursday, April 30, 2015

Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.5

No longer do my thoughts take a dip in the raw ether of emotions
But float like they never ever belonged to me
And I did never try to hold on to them desperately
Like one keeps priceless treasures under the safety
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A very interesting poem about the human thoughts which comes and goes and the comparison with the train journey seems to be exemplary imaginations of the poet. In fact the sayings of thoughts like a priceless treasure and almost all paras comes highly appreciable as a best poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 April 2015

For another thought to occupy the mind For another unknown destination. thank you for sharing your wonderful thought

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Rutvi Padhy 30 April 2015

Amazing poem...that's a really deep theme you've portrayed through your poem *_* amazing....

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