Saturday, November 15, 2014

Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

You and me and everyone's mind
are filled with hundred thousand thoughts.
They come and go with lightning speed
Change off and on in pace of light.
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Mallika Achuthan Menon
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Paul Sebastian 18 November 2015

Great thought on thoughts! Very well expressed. It is all in the the state of mind. True, thoughts can take us to heights or bring us low and destroy us. Thoughts can translate to things. Thoughts make us dream. If we don't dream dreams we are like a bird with a broken wing - that cannot fly! . Beautifully written. Enjoyed it. Thank you.

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Allotey Abossey 15 June 2015

Some are dark and deluded they bestowed us tons of pains. Idle minds are their favourite playground They pop up as dreams when we are asleep How true! ! Many people out of the thoughts of their minds take into dreams, and in delusions, think they've seen visions and go about deceiving many.. God bless you my friend.. God bless you

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Amitava Sur 01 May 2015

Very rightly you said. We the human being are differentiated from other species only because of having a treasure of thoughts in our mind. Though it may either create or destruct but it's unique. Thanks.

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Rajendran Muthiah 29 December 2014

No psychologist has said this much about 'thoughts'. Some of the lines can inspire critics or essayists to write several pages on them. Thoughts give wings to imagination-such wonderful lines give beauty to poetry.

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Rajendran Muthiah 29 December 2014

No psychologist has said this much about 'thoughts'. Some of the lines can inspire critics or essayists to write several pages on them. Thoughts give wings to imagination-such wonderful lines give beauty to poetry.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 18 December 2014

An age old saying that mind and thoughts are more important and it is the speediest acts that going in the mind and likes the poem.

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Prodip Kumar Basak 21 November 2014

Good imagery you have chosen. It is very creative one. Thank you for such a poem.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 16 November 2014

They live and thrive well in our minds If they are absent no life is there. A beautiful poem on the importance and utility of thought as essence of human spirit. A well written poem I enjoyed it.Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 16 November 2014

Yes, we think many things at a time. Some have clarity, Some are vague, Some are Dark. As you said Mind is the fastest thing in the world. A 7 out of 10 is my rating.

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