Thoughts of you come floating by
Like feathers on a breeze,
Gentle thoughts that calm my heart
And put my mind at ease
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Feelings.... with words that rhyme and you do it Lora so beautifully!
I hope that every loving thought that you release to the sky will reward you in return with a buzz that thanks you for it's freedom, just like my Cicadas used to buzz my my hand thanking me for their freedom when I let them go.
These are beautiful thoughts! I too have thoughts like these. But alas! I cannot say as beautifully! Your poem is sweet, as I said earlier about other poems too, like a song, melodious, takes one to dreams. Like many others, this poem of yours too deserves 10/10.
A light ideal romantic poem. May these thoughts remain with you. Read mine 'how can i count' when time permits.