Saturday, August 1, 2009

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I thought I loved you, but maybe I thought I was wrong
I thought people lived forever, but they were taken on
I thought I needed no one & now I am own
I thought I could do without and I can make it all alone
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Courtney Steele
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2009

I thought I loved you, but maybe I thought I was wrong I thought people lived forever, but they were taken on I thought I needed no one & now I am own I thought I could do without and I can make it all alone I thought so many times even thought I was strong I thought I could endure, but all my strength is gone I thought I can dismiss our relationship and my mind never roam I thought so many times and maybe my thoughts are wrong! ! ! ......weight it carefully dear before drawing any conclusion....10.....it is certain that yoou go to go alone in this life read mine... yes to to and you go alone

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Ted M 01 August 2009

Quite a confused state of thoughts due to the event, communicated well.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 01 August 2009

Very good poem Courtney...........it might need some editing

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