from a sea of dreams
reality crashes through.
Through the whispering leaves
Autumn makes things new
...
Read full text
Very nice Tiyler.........interesting thoughts. I hope your luck changes for you! sincerely, Mary
tiyler durden, what a lovely dreamy feel, your poem has. I didn't think you had it in you, to be honest! lol I was a little unsure of the two minds in the 2nd stanza, they kind of holted the smooth flow a little. Thoroughly enjoyable, all the same. 9 from Tai, pickie today.