Thoughtless Mind Comments

looked at the sky so vast.. N wondered how it kept the tranquility N remained calm n untouched by the noise of the buzzing city... wow....high philosophy, picturised fabulously! ! Keep it up!

Fabulous creation! Superb expression of profound experience! 10++

A wonderful poem that captures a mutual insight into the nature of thought and silence...

Either you have become an enlightened sage or you are going to be enlightened in near future..........wow....Good Write, , , , ,

your poem presentation is good...and your diction too...i agree when you say the present only is life...read my poem 'Brooding Over' where i present this concept in much fewer lines...thanks...10