Thoughtful Ingredients Comments

Hi Rose Ann, I have read about 5 of your poems and I must say, they tend to give a very peaceful feeling with a sort of healing energy and always seem to be positive I like reading them but I want to honestly say that they lack the flavor of poetic language and are very prosaic. I think if you employ some figurative devices to enhance rhythm and imagery that will help strengthen your poems. It was an honor and a pleasure reading them though and look forward to reading more. I sincerely hope that my comment does not upset you as I speak out of care and concern and you seem to be a very open-minded person who value honesty and sincerity.