Sunday, October 15, 2017

Thought Of God Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I would be there in the world
To live life with you in the slum,
I would be very glad
To express my sadness through the thrum.
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ARYAN MOHANTY
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VeiL24 03 January 2022

You're Breathtaking

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Aryan M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rajendra Rout 29 October 2018

I enjoy this poem. I agree with you sir

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Aryan Mohanty 10 November 2017

Today I m going 2 post my second poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 November 2017

If some vocate to save the earth By praying and beseeching to the lord, Say me one to help me along If I am helpless as the god. Beautiful poem shared dear Aryan, keep it up. Where is the second poem? 10+++ for the poem.

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Aryan Mohanty 18 October 2017

Tnx for stating ur feelings

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Binayakumar Mohanty 15 October 2017

Nicely crafted poem. Wonderful feelings. I loved it.

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