Thoughtless is the tideless ocean,
Reaping sewn threads with quiver and quill,
Letting endless hours pass in motion,
Staring down a street with no will,
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Wow1 thought needs nothing! U got a different topic.. And it worked out well.. Splendid.. It gets a 10..
This is my fav so far of your 6 poems i have read. its really good i love this one. I give it a 10+ i especially like the ending. keep writing poems like this one. I like where your ideas lead and the emotions you portrayed with each line. It left me wanting more! Great Job! !
Common experience, but uncommon(AWESOME) rendering! We all experience this situation, but never comprehend. Thoughts themselves are restless, by their very nature... Their complexity often make us fail in comprehending the entire phenomena.. but here, my good friend joseph has succeeded in making an ocean outta tides...! great! I love the ending... '.. there's no room for three....'