Joseph Skytta

Joseph Skytta

Marquette, Michigan at Marquette General Hospital
Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Thought Needs Nothing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thoughtless is the tideless ocean,
Reaping sewn threads with quiver and quill,
Letting endless hours pass in motion,
Staring down a street with no will,
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Joseph Skytta
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Ananthakumar S 19 October 2009

Common experience, but uncommon(AWESOME) rendering! We all experience this situation, but never comprehend. Thoughts themselves are restless, by their very nature... Their complexity often make us fail in comprehending the entire phenomena.. but here, my good friend joseph has succeeded in making an ocean outta tides...! great! I love the ending... '.. there's no room for three....'

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Anusha Subramanian 17 October 2009

Wow1 thought needs nothing! U got a different topic.. And it worked out well.. Splendid.. It gets a 10..

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Nicole Gehrman 13 October 2009

This is my fav so far of your 6 poems i have read. its really good i love this one. I give it a 10+ i especially like the ending. keep writing poems like this one. I like where your ideas lead and the emotions you portrayed with each line. It left me wanting more! Great Job! !

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Joseph Skytta

Joseph Skytta

Marquette, Michigan at Marquette General Hospital
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