Friday, June 23, 2017

Thought.... Comments

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As early as fourteen this thought was sown
Ever since then like a cancer it grows..
To discover the purpose of life
He traverses ahead a long road
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Jaya Das
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Mj Lemon 23 June 2017

This is a stunning work, Jaya. Self awareness is a journey, but it is also a destination. Once attained, or even observed, we can find peace, purpose, and tranquility. Brilliant writing, Jaya.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 June 2017

there is no purpose to life... I at 8 years of age did realise... I came as they forgot to use a condom...why! .. it was not available then...population was less and I was only 13th ..scope was unlimited.... one every 10 months, could be....Then I realised, having come from inside to outside... I and we all have to live through.. LIFE and DEATH...so let us make OUR life purposeful... Now I am about to enter the eight decade... believe me will you

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Jaya Das 23 June 2017

wow....such a beautiful comment....I am glad that you read it poet thank you so much.....

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