Monday, January 25, 2016

Thought Comments

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For weeks felt weak
For months felt blue
Through it all doll
I thought of you
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Weldon Davis
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 January 2016

So very profound and intense, sometimes love itself hurts so bad. Great write, brilliantly worded and superb use of the repetition technique.

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Weldon Davis 25 January 2016

Thank you for your comment and critique of my poem...I wrote Thought almost 10 years ago and just dug it out of an old shoe box..There are some rare instances where we write something that just resonates no matter what year it may be...Thank you

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