Sunday, March 31, 2013
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Rating: ★4.6
She lays nude, on the lap of my mind,
I care and ease until stars freeze
Her whisper, a calm breeze,
I lay asleep; dreaming to find...
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Frank James Davis
02 April 2013
So artistically expressed, Aftab! A most worthwhile offering.
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David Wood
31 March 2013
This is a well constructed poem about a difficult situation in India. Quite thought provoking.
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8/21/2025 4:20:01 AM # 1.0.0
an excellent piece of poetry. I'm in search of peace. I will find. I will find.