Sunday, November 2, 2014

Though You Resent Comments

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My Love justice will be served someday

you will resent me no more, and love will overwhelm your heart again.
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Neelapu Suresh
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Michael Walkerjohn 02 November 2014

Aloha Neelapu... What a straight shot arrow this is! I can visualize you, laughing as your bow is tensed and your sultry sneer as your fingers gently let er' fly! Reminds me to wear my body armour the next time I walk away from a relationship... I have enjoyed this write thoroughly, and I appreciate the candor suggested within its lines... such firm determination and steady tone... until the last and closing lines... Why ever would such pursuit of a relationship be in ones considerations... after ending it in your heart? Pursuit must then logically be for status or profit, and not for soul... Thank you again Neelapu for the thoughts I have experienced from this perusal of your words... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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