Sunday, August 16, 2020
Though You Are Gone Comments
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In night's still calm, words hushed and raw
‘Please send him back to me once more'
In truth a vow too strong to break,
a heart too shattered now to take
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Deluke Muwanigwa
16 August 2020
Its a light verse heavy in meaning. Beautiful and heartfelt. Hopefully its just a poem but if real life sorry about that. We live to love another day
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9/10/2025 9:54:40 PM # 1.0.0
i've had trouble with some of the wording, e.g. " Yet reason roars within my soul I thought it you who made me whole, but louder now the voice within is telling me I must begin, that that was then andthis is now, " I'd edit it with " to believe (or realize) " after " begin" . bri :)