Though We're Now Apart Comments
Though We're Now Apart
It rained, stopped, and rained again....here.
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THAT WAS/IS NOT TRUE. I think the 'North' and 'South' referred to North Carolina and South Carolina. (cont.)
GEE! ! ! I JUST REVIEWED COMMENTS BELOW...AND IT SEEMS AS THOUGH SOME READERS THINK/THOUGHT THAT MY WIFE HAD 'CALLED IT QUITS'/SEPARATED OR DIVORCED. (CONT.)
Truth is, at times, bitter; so also is love. Talking poem
Things happen in marriage, but you've got to keep it up. Nice poem
Real life meets love poetry...This works, Bri. This works brilliantly....
and.....attention: to ALL READERS and commenters of my poem, PAST, PRESENT, or FUTURE. Special thanks for HONEST comments, wheth
'it rained, it stopped and it rained again'. Married life is both bliss and blisters. Nicely penned
A sincerely heartfelt poem tinged with slight humor. Hoping the best for you, Bri!
So, ypu have a heart after all. Sorry about your breakup. Hope it will, mend. Your poem is lovely. And very heartfelt!
Kim, I'll see what I can do. May I tie her to a chair, to keep her THERE? bri : )
A wonderful poem so lovingly penned for a 'special person'.
Liked how you crafted this poem. So spontaneous and heartfelt. I concur with Bharati's comments. Your love and her love will keep the marriage alive.
A sweet poem on love. It is quite true that the mutual love and affinity do not hold us back from yelling to one another occasionally. That is because "we are human". Good one, Bri. Enjoyed reading it.
A great poem with touching expression.The last line expresses profoundly how you love your wife and how you miss her even in a few days of separation.
Well, Bharati, thanks for comment, ...BUT I don't 'exactly' 'miss her'. I know she is 'missing' and assume she'll be back someday and contact me at least once while gone. (cont.)
It is a good break for us I think. I pile dirty dishes in sink, pile dirty clothes in a corner, eat my ice cream and cake...and nothing else! (cont.)
BUT I still walk about 100 yards down to mailbox and up the same inclined driveway to return. I just came back and forget what else I planned to say. (cont.)
Damn PH says I 'need to fill in my name above, told to me after I hit 'send' I'd NOT copied it! ! Now she called and says she will be gone for a 2nd night.
Now she called and says she will be gone for a 2nd night. You know, I think, PH rarely asks for name of sender; it usually fills in the name for me.
You know, I think, PH rarely asks for name of sender; it usually fills in the name for me. : ) bri
Crystal clearly worded, a poem so sweetly tuned, especially for your dear wife. Brilliant, Bri.
THANKS, Sylvai, but....don't expect sweetness from me every time! ! ! : ))) bri
OOOPS! Sorry I misspelled 'Sylvia' one time here. I think that is called 'transposing' two letters, 'vai' instead of 'via'. : ) bri
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(cont.) In 2022 my wife had houses in both states (the states share a boundary) . I was probably in SC while she was 'just visiting' her property in NC! ! ! : )