Friday, September 6, 2013

Though We Parted Comments

Rating: 5.0

I keep tonight for you
On my porch will light a strobe
For you to find my way
Tiptoe in silken robe.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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David Mclansky 08 September 2013

I could write a poem out of each magical line. Very impressive.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 07 September 2013

That is beautiful. I enjoy reading it. The strong wish will certainly make happen...coming into your dream. Very well written. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Lorraine Colon 07 September 2013

Very romantic. I loved every word.

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Valsa George 07 September 2013

A poem with the mouldy scent of of the bygone days and a nostalgic longing for a lost companionship! There is a romantic flavour about the whole poem!

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 September 2013

Beautiful poem...You have beautifully portrayed the picture of calling one into your dream whom you have been parted..enjoyed it.

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