Friday, February 19, 2021

Though, They Had Many Arrows In Their Quiver. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I left a burning lamp of love at a place,
Where I thought there was no love.

Though, I saw many intellectuals in that meet,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 27 February 2021

Brilliant..Though, I saw many intellectuals in that meet, Yet what was lacking was human touch.

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Suzon Albert 24 February 2021

Superb Though, I saw many intellectuals in that meet, Yet what was lacking was human touch.

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Zuzu Mutairi 23 February 2021

Amusing poem. Little things makes all the difference. Though, beauty was spread all over there, Everyone was seeing yet insight was missing.

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Shreya Hacks 23 February 2021

Every verse is unique and wonderful.

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 February 2021

Winning hearts is an art which we do not find now a days.. with many friend and no enemy is a dream...

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Zoyza Da Vinka 22 February 2021

Blown...Though, all hearts were feeling the pain of separation, Yet what was lacking was sincere crying eyes.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 February 2021

A good poem. Thank for the translation.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2021

Excellent metaphoric poem, when there is no insight, though intellectuals are present, there is missing something most important, a very thought-provoking poem, true poetically rendered, hope your lamp of love have lighted most of them,5 stars!

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