Thursday, July 18, 2013

Though Me A Grass. Comments

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Perhaps I am only a grass
Living on the top of this hill
Trees here may think
They are taller than me
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
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Valsa George 27 July 2013

There is greatness in littleness, if we can find it! It is all a matter of perception and attitude! When blessings are counted, the grass won't regret its puny existence and aspire to be a tree! Enjoyed! !

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Dinesan Madathil 25 July 2013

While the theme and rendering of thoughts have splendid charms to boast of, I am afraid the the title of the poem needs to be immediately edited/changed... THOUGH I AM A GRASS is apt and British. Take it right and light Jayan.

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thank you Ramesh Rai sir

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Ramesh Rai 25 July 2013

An ant is more stronger, more hard working, more safe than an elephant. about a grass on hill top is most luckiest than all other plants of forest. great write with a great and deep meaning. thnx for sharing.

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