Thursday, February 12, 2009

*** Thou -My Valentine *** Comments

Rating: 4.0

I smiled that smile
an inward smile
thine eyes with that shine
when I pledged with mine,
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ANJALI SINHA
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 April 2016

The rose that climbeth to seek my lips exploding like bushfire, Not to be extinguished, or forgotten, like that star one dusky tempestuous night when wanted to spread her locks of light a spiteful cloud doth hide her sight. Let thy love, feed on mine, beloved. As long as I live, Till age snows white hairs on me thou wilt live in my heart. Loved these lines, the bet ones for me. Thank you poet for sharing this first experience so frankly.

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Abhijit Surve 09 March 2009

heart warming.... this one...gr8 way 2 express love...! !

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~ Jon London ~ 03 March 2009

Beautiful work my friend, thanks for your kind comment on my poem *Peace* Keep expressing Jon

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 27 February 2009

One of the PH readers thanks this author for her Valentine and congratulates her.

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premji premji 25 February 2009

anju, you simply prove: love means sacrifice............ 10 votes

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Wali Jamali 24 February 2009

Thoroughly refreshing poem. Nice present to the poets community.

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Sebastine Humaemo 24 February 2009

a perfect poem for a valentine....lines done with most care and love.....am sure, this is the greatest gift he/she can ever get on valentine day.............

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Kanishk Gupta 23 February 2009

Now thats exactly how a valentine poem should be! ! ! ! I dont know how you do it, but each and every line looks so honest and sincere! Tis a sad thing i got to read it 9 days late! ! ! : p 10!

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 February 2009

heartfelt wishes... significant piece not only on the day of hearts..but everyday expressed true love...in a fine flowing write... so calmly written.....interesting to read...very soothing....very light to the heart.. 10+++

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 February 2009

Beautiful Valentine's day poem. Enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing with me Ravi

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Carl Harris 22 February 2009

My, My, Anjali, this is by far the most beautiful, romantic, and longest Valentine's Day poem I have ever read! What man wouldn't give his right arm to have such an awsome poem written about him! Carl.

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Stacey Watts 22 February 2009

Oh Happy Valentines Day to a romantically beautiful soul. Superb piece.

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Sandra Fowler 22 February 2009

Your words are so vivid and alive. May love and remembrance always be yours.10, of course. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 February 2009

Yes! This is Anju's style......compact wording, powerful expression, great, apt vocab. some scents of yesteryear fragrances in exprression.........just beautiful

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 20 February 2009

MARVELLOUS! ...standing ovation anjali..one of those rare poems tht make your eyes twinkle and your lips curl into a warm indulgent smile.!

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John Smith 14 February 2009

'For when I have you I have my sunshine' So beautifully romantic.

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Aijaz Asif 13 February 2009

an awesome write, very beautiful you know how to make readers float on the waves of you magical words and thoughts...thanks for sharing 10++ and A++ rgds asif

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Dr. Ram Sharma 13 February 2009

A VERY SENSUOUS LOVE POEM.FIRST LOVE, FIRST SIGHT, FIRST ONE

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 February 2009

Doth the angels speak of love, verily I know that his heart hears the words of her love, divine the heart in such eloquence declares thou art my forever love... Beautiful Anjali got to be ten..

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Catrina Heart 13 February 2009

Lovely and sweet Valentine's composition...10+++

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