Saturday, November 6, 2010

Thou My Mother Comments

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Thou my mother
You re the driver of my car
In you palm I cry and I laugh
Your rapper is my urine cleaner
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Olugbenga Ayoola
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David Burton - Richardson 18 September 2013

A good meaningfull Poem, deeply felt with good emotion. An emotional work about Motherhood

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Cs Vishwanathan 06 November 2010

Very good tribute to ones mother. The contrast of its images with the emotion of the last sentence makes this poem effective and worth remembering. As Yoonoos Peerbocus, a fitting tribute to our primary love.

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