Monday, October 19, 2009

Thou Heart Slender On Me In Tender Comments

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Thou heart slender on me in tender
and the wild nerves in blunder
crushed you in thunder
when silhouetle on a bright day`s siesta
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lily peace lago every by to ph
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Kranthi Pothineni 31 October 2009

Simply beautiful. Touching write.

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Catrina Heart 30 October 2009

stunning composition shared.....loved its theme! ! !

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Sandhya S N 30 October 2009

Emotion packed words... beautiful.... regards sandhya

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Rakesh Bedi 20 October 2009

i enjoyed your poem, lago lago......quite interesting i found it to be, dear...

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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